I’m horrible at self-editing.

Really.

I know it’s one of the most important aspects of the process, especially if you have to deliver to a client the best of what you’ve done, but I suck at it.

On that note, I’d like your opinion on which one is better and why. They were both taken today at Dr. Sun Yat Sen memorial park with a Kodak Easyshare digital P&S camera (my film RF is still in the shop). Conversion to black & white was done in CS2. Lighting was ambient-only. The subjects are my friend Michelle and Rita, the daughter of another friend, Kate.

Photo #1
Little Rita and Michelle, photo 1

Photo #2
Little Rita and Michelle, photo 2

Personally, I like the first photo better because you can see Michelle’s face and there are more details, such as her pendent. On the other hand, photo #2 seems to be a more tender moment?

And because I know Kate will probably see this because Facebook is having issues with uploads at the moment, here’s a photo of Rita with her mom. :-)
Rita & Kate

Brian
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  • http://www.craigfergusonimages.com Craig Ferguson

    The first one for the expression on the face.

  • Brian

    That’s my gut reaction, too. Not just the expression, but there is more detail to take in, too.

    I’m practicing with my dP&S and Photoshop for the walk ;-)

  • Kate

    Well, I am just a P&S gal myself…but I have to agree that the 1st one tells a better story. Although, I love the second one since I know that Rita is giving one of her sloppy kisses behind all that hair!

  • http://f-hole.far-kew.com Pete (f-hole)

    I’ll go with the flow, one too, although I quite like two too!

  • http://aliblogblog.com Aliblogblog.com

    My money on the #1 pic :)

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